暑假里小作者们骑单车到白云山出游了,作者的暑假旅游日记这篇英语作文按照总分总的写法条理清晰,逻辑性强。多种结构及一些较高级的词汇的恰当使用,使文章亮光层出不穷,彰显出小作者扎实的语言功底。是一篇名副其实的上乘佳作。
Last Saturday,we went to Baiyun Mountain to have a picnic.We really had a good time. At 8:00 in the morning ,we gathered at the school gate and then headed for Baiyun Mountain by bike.After several minutes' riding,we arrived at the foot of the hill.Having had a short rest,we began climbing.The climbing was hard but when we saw the beautiful scenery and heard the singing of birds,hardship was gone.We had a picnic at the hillside,where we also held a series of interesting activities.Some students sang songs,some told amusing stories and others danced.How happy and excited we were! In the late afternoon,we went back.It was indeded a happy and unforgettable experience.
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